We thought that there were a few elements which could be changed to give a much better film. For example, the opening sound track didn't match the location of the scene as it sounded like it was meant to be in a jungle. however, your camera work and shots were very successful.
We believe that the pushing of the victim isn't clear, throughout the opening it seems that the characters know each other, so the narrative isn't clear.
The narrative of the story was clear, however it lacked suspense therefore it didn't seem conventional. To improve this we think you should speed up the chase, so that it seems more like a thriller. furthermore it doesn't actually seem like and opening, just a short film
There are no credits, titles or ident therefore it didnt look like an opening. This could be resolved simply by adding titles.
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