Friday 12 March 2010

roughcut evaluation S1-23

We looked at this groups rough cut and we thought that, overall, it was OK,. However, there was a very large lack of music especially during the bike chase scene which takes away some of the suspense of the chase. The music that was present though was effective in setting the scene at the very beginning. There was also no credits at all, which should really be necessary for a good grade.

The location was used effectively by having the college grounds being empty and silent. Furthermore the night element succeeded in creating a good sense of the thriller genre.

The camera shots could have been a bit more varied, as it was mostly long shots.

The clothing that was worn was fairly normal and there was no dressing up or costumes that were used, costumes could had been used to identify the antagonist and protagonist as it is a little confusing as to whether the person in the black is supposed to be good or bad, if he was the bad guy shouldnt he have been the person chasing the other?

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