Feedback from s1-21;
The ten second breakdown is well described, although including screen grabs of the location of Google maps may help the audience to visualize the cineworld complex. Shot types in your location are explored well. Difficulties you may come across would be permission to film in the complex as they is not legal. I believe it is a different idea to other peoples thriller openings, which comes across as a good thing because it explores ways of going about ideas. Editing the soundtrack so the heart beat mixes well will need time taking over it. Overall this group has good inspiration to aspire to and a good plan.


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