At the beginning, the music playing behind the Ident will cause a conflict when it then switches to the film, it should remain the same genre as the rest of the film.
Add a few more details, and check what you've put in the blog, some minor typo mistakes.
We like the idea of the chase scenes on the bikes, it has the potential to create good tension that goes with the genre conventions. It would be improved if there was a fast paced soundtrack during this scene, it'll just add to the enjoyment of watching.
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